Here I have added the sell line "Grunge Takes On Goth In This Year's Battle Of The Bands!" This sell line uses the technique of alliteration to attract the reader. I have also added in more details such as a price, issue number and barcode.
Here I have added another subsidiary image and used the sell line "The Story behind Sephy Nightmare's New Ink!" I have used the slang term "Ink" to refer to her tattoo as it is more in sync with my target audience. I have also added in main image, I feel that the brick background and feathered effect work well together although the image could have been sized up quite a bit.
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